Composition

2019-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. amicable I want to end in a amicable manner with my girlfriend not making her cry in despair. 2. flirtatious I easily get tempted by a flirtatious pretty woman. 3. preposterous My boss in the previous workplace is preposterous, absurd, unreasonable, and unethical, and also in terms of money, he is deceitful and corruptible. 4. looking for a needle in a haystack If a woman tries to find a man who only wants to have relations with her and is willing to abstain from other women, I can say that it is like looking for a needle in a haystack. 5. understand where you're coming Both of my girls whom I currently seeing understand where I am coming from, and so it makes me feel guilty.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


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Cheers!
Jean



1. amicable
I want to end in a amicable manner with my girlfriend not making her cry in despair.

>> I hope to amicably end my relationship with my girlfriend as I don\'t want her to cry in despair.


 2. flirtatious
I easily get tempted by a flirtatious pretty woman.

>>  or: I find it challenging to resist the lure of a flirtatious attractive woman. [Some women may be pretty but aren\'t attractive.^^]


 3. preposterous
My boss in the previous workplace is preposterous, absurd, unreasonable, and unethical, and also in terms of money, he is deceitful and corruptible.

>> or: My previous boss is preposterous, absurd, unreasonable, and unethical, and moneywise, he is deceitful and corruptible.


 4. looking for a needle in a haystack
If a woman tries to find a man who only wants to have relations with her and is willing to abstain from other women, I can say that it is like looking for a needle in a haystack.

>> or: Searching for a man who can be fully devoted and faithful to only one woman is like looking for a needle in a haystack.

>> or: Trying to find a one-woman man in this day and age is like looking for a needle in a haystack.


 5. understand where you\'re coming
Both of my girls whom I currently seeing understand where I am coming from, and so it makes me feel guilty.

>> Both of the girls whom I\'m currently seeing understand where I\'m coming from that\'s why I feel more guilty.

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