Composition
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강사 첨삭
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1. willpower 
2. get-go 
3. mind over matter 
4. flat out 
5. demonstrative about feelings
I should have strong willpower in order to succeed.
>> Should I want to reach my target, I would have to possess steadfast and indomitable willpower.
I wanted to have a new girlfriend feom the get-go.
>> I wanted to have a new girlfriend from the get-go.
>> or: It seems that I must have hoped subconsciously to have a new girlfriend from the get-go.
Whether I flirt with a new pretty girl or not is mind over matter.
>> Whether I flirt with a new pretty girl or not is a simple case of mind over matter.
The word that I love her was a flat-out lie.
>> My declaration of love was a flat-out lie.
If I talk about the matter about my girlfriend, it would be too demonstrative about feelings.
>> If I talked about my girlfriend, it would show that I\'m too demonstrative about my feelings.
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