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2019-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. crossed my mind 2. go-between 3. liaison officer 4. disseminate The memory of my negative experience crossed my mind suddenly. I work as a go-between in my project team, actually as a translator. I am a liaison officer between foreign engineers and Korean engineers. So, I need to disseminate all the important info over the team.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

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Cheers!
Jean

1. crossed my mind
2. go-between
3. liaison officer
4. disseminate

The memory of my negative experience crossed my mind suddenly.

>> or: The unpleasant and agonizing memories of my past crossed my mind without warning.

I work as a go-between in my project team, actually as a translator.
>> or: Working as a translator is my main role in my project team, or in a more general sense, I\'m the go-between.

I am a liaison officer between foreign engineers and Korean engineers.
>> or: I was hired in the capacity of a liaison officer.

So, I need to disseminate all the important info over the team.

>> or: Ergo, disseminating information to the team is my task.

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