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2019-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. xenophobia 2. name names 3. atrocious 4. think highly of 5. wicked I do not have Xenophobia because I have Thai girlfriends. I can name names of war criminal countries during the World War. They did atrocious crimes toward colonies, especially Japan. I think highly of Switzerland, because they tried to be neutral. In my arrogant opinion, Japan has wicked nature.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


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Cheers!
Jean



1. xenophobia
2. name names
3. atrocious
4. think highly of
5. wicked

I do not have Xenophobia because I have Thai girlfriends.
>> or: Having Thai friends means I\'m not xenophobic.


 I can name names of war criminal countries during the World War.
>> or: Many countries were involved in war crimes during World War II, and I can even name names. 

>> or:  I can name names of war criminals during World War II.


 They did atrocious crimes toward colonies, especially Japan.
>> These countries, especially Japan, committed atrocious war crimes toward colonies and other weaker countries.

>> or: These war criminals perpetrated numerous atrocities toward vulnerable places and people. 


 I think highly of Switzerland, because they tried to be neutral.
>> or: I think highly of Switzerland as they were one of the states that remained neutral during the war.


 In my arrogant opinion, Japan has wicked nature.

>> or: The inhumanities that my country and my people went through may have clouded my judgment, but as far as I\'m concerned, Japan is the Devil incarnate.

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