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2019-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. keep my options open 2. cohabit 3. consider all angles 4. turn things around 5. for the sake of argument Usually, women want to keep their options open, but the \'biological clock\' governs the time for having children. If a woman cohabits with a man and gets pregnant, she could be embarrassed, so she should consider all angles before cohabiting. South Korea is trying to turn things around regarding North Korea\'s nuclear, but North Korea sticks to nuclear. I recognized that you stand against me during the class just for the sake of arguments.

강사 첨삭

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Jean


1. keep my options open
2. cohabit
3. consider all angles
4. turn things around
5. for the sake of argument

Usually, women want to keep their options open, but the \'biological clock\' governs the time for having children. 

>> More often than not, women would keep their options open if not for their biological clock that\'s ticking.

 If a woman cohabits with a man and gets pregnant, she could be embarrassed, so she should consider all angles before cohabiting.
>> Cohabiting and getting pregnant outside marriage could bring disgrace upon a woman and her family. Ergo, one should consider all angles first before cohabiting.


 South Korea is trying to turn things around regarding North Korea\'s nuclear, but North Korea sticks to nuclear.
>> South Korea is trying to turn things around in the North Korean nuclear negotiations, but the North isn\'t likely to give up its nuclear weapons.


 I recognized that you stand against me during the class just for the sake of arguments.

>> or: I realized that you frequently stand against me during our discussion only for the sake of argument.

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