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2019-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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 Does hardship make a person stronger? If so, under what conditions and at what point is it too much hardship? If not, what makes a person stronger? Hardship can make a person stronger, but too much hardship make the person not be able to get back in his feet. I also hope my hardship in my twenties has made me strong enough to i through my thirties.

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Does hardship make a person stronger? If so, under what conditions and at what point is it too much hardship? If not, what makes a person stronger?

Hardship can make a person stronger, but too much hardship make the person not be able to get back in his feet. I also hope my hardship in my twenties has made me strong enough to i through my thirties.

>> Going through tough times can make a person stronger and more resilient, but too much of this may crush an individual to the point that he/she may not be able to bounce back. Also, I hope the hardships that I experience in my 20s would prepare me for the uphill battle that I would face in my 30s.

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