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2019-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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There are people who do not keep the rule in our society. That is a serious cause for concern. I want a one-man woman. However, it is hard to see one at a time. I do not want to neutralize my dog since it is cruel.

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There are people who do not keep the rule in our society. That is a serious cause for concern.
>> or: Breaking or circumventing the rules is always a cause for concern.


 I want a one-man woman. However, it is hard to see one at a time.

>> or: As much as I want to be with a one-man woman, honestly, it\'s challenging to see one woman at a time.

 I do not want to neutralize my dog since it is cruel.

>> or: Neutralizing a dog is considered animal cruelty.

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