Composition
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There are people who do not keep the rule in our society. That is a serious cause for concern.
I want a one-man woman. However, it is hard to see one at a time.
I do not want to neutralize my dog since it is cruel.
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There are people who do not keep the rule in our society. That is a serious cause for concern.
>> or: Breaking or circumventing the rules is always a cause for concern.
I want a one-man woman. However, it is hard to see one at a time.
>> or: As much as I want to be with a one-man woman, honestly, it\'s challenging to see one woman at a time.
I do not want to neutralize my dog since it is cruel.
>> or: Neutralizing a dog is considered animal cruelty.
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