Composition
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Should illegal immigrants be deported?
Yes. Because they are illegal, they should have been deported in the first place. If they had been qualified to immigrate to a country, they would have been accepted in the beginning.
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Yes. Because they are illegal, they should have been deported in the first place.
>> Yes because they are illegally there, that is why they should be deported.
If they had been qualified to immigrate to a country, they would have been accepted in the beginning.
>> If they had been qualified to immigrate to a country, they would have been accepted from the beginning.
or >> If they had been qualified to immigrate to a country, they would have been accepted in the first place.
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