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I hope you enjoy your time in Japan~~
Actually, Japanese foods are my favoite among world\'s foods. :)
Enjoy Sushi, Donkatsu, Ramen, etc.
Hi [이름]!
I was supposed to say I HOPE you\'re having a blast in Thailand, but I have a feeling that you\'re already having the time of your life there.
This is the first homework that I\'m checking after the long vacation haha. I had the best time ever. I managed to accomplish what I set out to do.
I wish for you to do the same. See you when you get back.~~
Cheers!
Jean
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What is the best way for a person to attain happiness?
One thing is to do one\'s best, the other thing is to admit his own.
>> One thing is to do one\'s best, the other thing is to admit his own mistake.
>> or: To my way of thinking, one way is to do your best in everything and another is to own up to one\'s mistake.
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