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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Mr. [Name]!
Happy Tuesday.
Thank you for sending this composition to me.
I noticed that you placed your class on hold today. It seems like your busy.
I hope that you are doing fine.
See you on our next class. ^^
~Teacher Gina
At Statoil, I was a person in charge for Aasta Hanteen Project including commissioning division as well.
There were over 500 users while the project being climax.
the service manager accepted me to do all the things related IT.
He’s been cranky and fussy to me and others when he has troubles, then he has experience of IT little bit. So that he wants to know what I do or what I change all the time.
But I would make him understand several times with detailed description.
finally, He recognized my service.
>> At Statoil, I was the person in-charge for the Aasta Hanteen Project including the Commissioning Division as well.
There were over 500 users while the project was on its peak.
The service manager accepted me to do all the things related to IT.
He\'s been cranky and fussy to me and to others when he has troubles. He only has a little experience when it comes to IT that\'s why he wants to know the things I\'m doing and changing all the time. I would always help him out and make him understand those things with detailed description. With that, he finally recognized my service.
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