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> Do you think the age for driving should be raised or lowered?
I think it should be banned on teenagers. Because they cannot take responsibilities for any accidents, we should not allow them to drive.
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Do you think the age for driving should be raised or lowered?
I think it should be banned on teenagers. Because they cannot take responsibilities for any accidents, we should not allow them to drive.
>> or: Based on personal experience, I\'d say that teenage driving should be banned considering these teens can\'t take full responsibility for any accidents they may cause. Hence, they should be prohibited from being behind the wheel.
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