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Dear [Name]. [Name] and Mr. [Name], Good morning! I'm [이름][이름] you from FICO of Behr korea and I will be user of scaning system . As Mr.Kim mention, we wants to use ELO system as soon as possible. We ready for training and we can attend training at 04:00~06:00PM today in local time .( 08:00~10:00AM in Germany time) Would you please give us an invitation if you don't mind at 04:00~06:00PM today in local time.( 08:00~10:00AM in Germany time) If you can't training today, please give us an invitaion schedule next week. We available next Wednesday from 04:00 PM in local time (08:00AM in Germany time) I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you for your help.

Hello there,       Good afternoon.  Thank you so much for sending this composition. I made few corrections for you. I hope these would help. - T. Ritchel Dear [Name]. [Name] and Mr. [Name],>>CorrectGood morning!>>CorrectI\'m [이름][이름] you from FICO of Behr Korea and I will be the user of scaning system .>>Correct >> I\'m [이름][이름] you from FICO of Behr Korea and I will be the one to the scaning system .As Mr.Kim mention, we wants to use ELO system as soon as possible.>>As Mr. [Name] mentioned, we want to use ELO system as soon as possible.We ready for training and we can attend training at 04:00~06:00PM today in local time .( 08:00~10:00AM in Germany time)>>We are ready for training and we can attend training at 4:00-6:00 pm in our local time. (8:00-10:00 am German time)Would you please give us an invitation if you don\'t mind at 04:00~06:00PM today in our local time.( 08:00~10:00AM in Germany time)>>CorrectIf you can\'t training today, please give us an invitaion schedule next week.>>If you can\'t have the training today, please give us invitation for the schedule next week.We available next Wednesday from 04:00 PM in local time (08:00AM in Germany time)>>We are available next Wednesday from 4:00 pm local time ( 8:00 am German time)I\'m looking forward for your reply.>>CorrectThank you for your help. >>Correct