Composition
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Describe your most memorable holiday or vacation spot in as much detail as possible.
Visiting Thailand was my most memorable holiday in my life in Feb. 2019. Because I have a Thai girlfriend, I felt I am so happy during the trip. There were so many cheap goods to enjoy together with my girlfriend.
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Visiting Thailand was my most memorable holiday in my life in Feb. 2019.
>>>February 2019 is the most memorable holiday in my life when I visited Thailand.
Because I have a Thai girlfriend, I felt I am so happy during the trip.
>>>I have a Thai girlfriend and I felt happy during the trip.
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