Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
If you could change one thing about your past, what would it be?
I would have studied harder in my high school, because I wish I would have graduated from much better universities.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!^^
Thank you for making your homework. You can add more details in your composition to exercise your writing skills. However, your sentence structure is good. Keep it up! ^_^
I would have studied harder in my high school, because I wish I would have graduated from much better universities.
>>> I would have studied harder in my high school because I wish I would have graduated from much better universities.
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