Composition
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
What do you think the best invention is? Explain in 5 sentencesBest invention.
Steam engine is the best invention because it made the UK and other European countries have supremacy over the globe.
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Steam engine is the best invention because it made the UK and other European countries have supremacy over the globe.
>> The steam engine is the best invention because it helped start the Industrial Revolution and aided in the acquisition of superiority of the UK and other European countries.
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