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Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good afternoon!
I have some questions about procedure of QM notification.
I faced with variety situations when I progress charge back to Suppliers with QM notification.
This case is charge back to DHC.
QU requested the feedback to DHC about claim, but QU didn't received the any feedabck from DHC.
And QU requeted the repayment in Nov using QM notification.
So, I issued the debit note, and I sent the debit note to DHC with some warning message.
The warning says If you didn't reply, we will pay this month without this amount.
Suddenly, DHC sent e-mail to QU about this matter and they have time to discuss.
After consultation, QU requested cancel the repayment to Finance.
Mr. [Name] from QU sent me the scrinshot of Mr. [Name] 's signiture as seen below.
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Dear [Name]. [Name],>>CORRECT!Good afternoon!>>CORRECT!I have some questions about procedure of QM notification.
>>I have some questions about the procedure of the QM notification.I faced with variety situations when I progress charge back to Suppliers with QM notification.
>>I\'m faced with a variety of situations when I progressed back to the suppliers with the QM notification.This case is charge back to DHC.
>>CORRECT!QU requested the feedback to DHC about claim, but QU didn\'t received the any feedabck from DHC.
>>QU requested the feedback to DHC about the claim, but QU didn\'t receive any of the feedbacks from DHC.And QU requeted the repayment in Nov using QM notification.
>>QU requested the repayment on Nov. using the QM notification.So, I issued the debit note, and I sent the debit note to DHC with some warning message.
>>So, I issued a debit note and sent it to DHC with some warning messages.The warning says If you didn\'t reply, we will pay this month without this amount.
>>The warning says that if you didn\'t reply, we will pay for this month without this amount.Suddenly, DHC sent e-mail to QU about this matter and they have time to discuss.
>>Suddenly, DHC sent an e-mail to QU about this matter and they had time to discuss.After consultation, QU requested cancel the repayment to Finance.
>>After the consultation, QU requested to cancel the repayment to the finance.Mr. [Name] from QU sent me the scrinshot of Mr. [Name] \'s signiture as seen below.
>>Mr. [Name] from QU sent me the screenshot of Mr. [Name]\'s signature as seen below.
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