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The best thing of work is money.
I can ear money from work.
With this money, I can make my GF happy.
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Hi [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your homework!
Another thing great about work is the experience and skills that you can acquire.
Like they say, work smart!
See you next time!~
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The best thing of work is money.
>>The best thing about working is money.
I can ear money from work.
>>I earn money from working.
With this money, I can make my GF happy.
>>With the money I have earned, I can buy my girlfriend things to make her happy.
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