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What is your favorite holiday?
There isn't any special holidays that I like the most.
I just like the long holiday.
And also, I love to have holidays when other people do not take days off, since the places are not that crowded.
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I like all holidays since it gives me some time to rest.
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There isn\'t any special holidays that I like the most.
>>There aren\'t any special holidays that I like the most.
I like all holidays since it gives me some time to rest.
>> I like all the holidays since it gives me some time to have a rest.
And also, I love to have holidays when other people do not take days off, since the places are not that crowded.
>> Also, I love holidays when people don\'t take any days off since the different places are not too crowded.
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