Composition
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How can organizational culture affect a person\'s performance?
If office atmosphere is not that reasonable and rational, all workers would think of not doing work hard but taking only advantages.
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If office atmosphere is not that reasonable and rational, all workers would think of not doing work hard but taking only advantages.
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If office atmosphere is not that reasonable and rational, all workers would think of not doing work hard but taking only advantages.
>> If the atmosphere in the workplace is not reasonable and rational, the company\'s employees will no longer be efficient in their work.
Rather, they will take advantage of their salary and not be passionate about their job.
Rather, they will take advantage of their salary and not be passionate about their job.
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