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When You’re 90 Years Old, What Will Matter Most To You?
I think I will regard my degree of success as the most important matter.
I wanna be proud of my life at that time.
And my offsprings should be also doing well..
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Hi [이름]!
I like your answer! That is true, maybe your legacy is what counts and what you did during your lifetime.
Anyway, see you in class!
~T.Ysabelle
I think I will regard my degree of success as the most important matter.
>> CORRECT
OR >> My degree of success will matter most to me at that age.
I wanna be proud of my life at that time.
>>I want to be proud of my accomplishments in life by that time.
And my offsprings should be also doing well..
>> My children should have a good and stable life.
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