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What Habits Are Holding You Back From Success?
I think my habit which I get easily angry with colleagues is making me make some troubles.
I should be more calm..
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework!
Maybe you need to read good books which will train your mind.
See you next time! ^^
~ T.Ysabelle
I think my habit which I get easily angry with colleagues is making me make some troubles.
I should be more calm..
I should be more calm..
>> I think that something that holds me back from success is my temper.
>> I easily get angry with my colleagues and we create trouble.
I should be more calm..
>> I should be calm when these things happen.
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