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When you meet someone new, are there some things that you want to keep secret or private? Why? What? Explain your answer.
Of course, I do not want to disclose many aspects of my life. It is regarding my personal weakness. Because I do not feel comfortable when I meet someone newly. It is far more comfortable to talk about myself with my aquaintance.
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Of course, I do not want to disclose many aspects of my life.
>> CORRECT
It is regarding my personal weakness. Because I do not feel comfortable when I meet someone newly.
>> It is with regard to my personal weakness because I do not feel comfortable when I just met someone.
It is far more comfortable to talk about myself with my aquaintance.
>> It is far more comfortable to talk about myself with my acquaintances.
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