Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Is it easy to start a business in your country? Explain in 2-3 sentences.
Never easy. Korea is called like 헬조선 which means the hell. It is mainly because our society does not offer opportunities to startups.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework!
I see, maybe the turn over rate is also quite high.
Anyway I will see you in class!
~T.Ysabelle
Never easy.
>>It is not easy.
Korea is called like 헬조선 which means the hell.
>> Korea is called \"헬조선\" which means \"hell\".
It is mainly because our society does not offer opportunities to startups.
>> This is mainly because our society does not offer job opportunities to newbies in the working world.
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