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학생이 쓴 원문
1. Adventurous _______________________________.
2. Are you an adventurous person? why or why not?
I should be more adventurous when I try to get a girl\\\'s mind.
I am not that adventurous person since I do not want take risks normally.
PS. I will read and study today\'s lesson in advance.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]^^
I hope you\'re having a great Thursday!
Thank you for taking time to do this homework. Means a lot.
PS: Hoping that you\'ll do that.
^^ Teacher Annie ^^
I should be more adventurous when I try to get a girl\\\'s mind.
>>>I should be more adventurous when I try to get a girl\'s mind.
>>>I should be more adventurous when I try to get a girl\'s mind.
I am not that adventurous person since I do not want take risks normally.
>>>I am not that adventurous since I do not want to take risks.
OR>>>I am not an adventurous person since I do not want taking a risk.
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