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2019-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Ysabelle

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How are birthdays celebrated in your country? As for me, I just buy a cake and eat with my family. There is not that many special things I do. However, usually, people go to some fine restaurants, maybe.

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As for me, I just buy a cake and eat with my family.
>> CORRECT

There is not that many special things I do.
>> There aren\'t that many special things I do. 

However, usually, people go to some fine restaurants, maybe.
>> However, people usually go to some fine restaurants.

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