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2011-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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Dear all, Good morning! I'm Bella! I'd like to inform you about good restaurant for welcome party for Ms.Eunjin next Monday. I will reserve on next Monday 08:00 PM 9 person. The restaurant name is G. Restaurant address: 128-130 Centem leaders mark 1514 Woo Dong HaewoondaeGu Busan city Tel:[전화번호] Let's enjoy the special dinner.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your composition. Have a nice day ahead! Take care!!!!

Here are my corrections:

Dear all,

>>Dear All,

>>Dear [Name],
Good morning! I\'m Bella!

>>Correct!
I\'d like to inform you about good restaurant for welcome party for Ms.Eunjin next Monday.

>>I would like to invite you for a welcome party for Ms. [Name] that will be held in a restaurant next Monday.
I will reserve on next Monday 08:00 PM 9 person.

>>I will be reserving seats for 9 persons/people.
The restaurant name is G.

>>The restaurant\'s name is G.
Restaurant address:

>>Correct!
128-130 Centem leaders mark 1514 Woo Dong HaewoondaeGu Busan city

>>128-130 Cebtem leaders Mark 1514 Woo Dong HaewoondaeGu, Busan City
Tel:[전화번호]

>>Correct!
Let\'s enjoy the special dinner.

>>Correct!

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