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If you were to recommend an amusement park, which one would you recommend and why?
In Korea, I recommend you to visit Everland since it has the fastest roller coaster in South Korea.
Other than that, Everland also offers various rides and fun things.
I forgot that I want to use OPIC MASTER. ha-ha.
Let me practice for that OPIC test.
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Hello [이름]!
I forgot!
We will have the OPIC today.
See you in class!
In Korea, I recommend you to visit Everland since it has the fastest roller coaster in South Korea.
>>I recommend you to visit Everland in Korea since it has the fastest roller coaster in South Korea.
Other than that, Everland also offers various rides and fun things.
>>CORRECT
I forgot that I want to use OPIC MASTER.
>>CORRECT
Let me practice for that OPIC test.
>>CORRECT
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