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Is it better to be physically attractive or intelligent?
Absolutely it is.
Physical attractiveness is the most important in life, especially with regard to love.
Sexual attraction is a large part of falling in love.
Also, intelligence can make us well-off.
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>> It absolutely is.
Physical attractiveness is the most important in life, especially with regard to love.
>>Physical attractiveness is the most important thing in life especially with regards to love.
Sexual attraction is a large part of falling in love.
>> CORRECT
Also, intelligence can make us well-off.
>> Also, intelligence can help us become well-off.
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