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Dear [Name],
Good afternoon!
How was your vacation?
I hope that you had a great time.
I have some qustions about balance of RNV.
Last Month, we couldn't terminated balance of 1900250 (Goods Received No Voucher RNV).
We tried to terminate the balance in so many ways with Mr. [Name] and Ms. [Name].
But we couldn't solve it.
Would you please give me a solution on how to make a zero ?
The PO# is 5900000941 and the vendor# is 21002552 (BG).
Please see the history as seen below.
Thank you for your help.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday Ms. [Name]!
I hope you had a wonderful weekend.
Anyway, please be guided with the corrections I made below.
Have a wonderful day ahead.
I\'ll call you later! :)
Dear [Name],
>>CORRECT!Good afternoon!
>>CORRECT!How was your vacation?
>>CORRECT!I hope that you had a great time.
>>CORRECT!I have some qustions about balance of RNV.
>>I have some questions about the balance of RNV.Last Month, we couldn\'t terminated balance of 1900250 (Goods Received No Voucher RNV).
>>Last month, we couldn\'t terminate the balance of 1900250 (goods received no voucher RNV).We tried to terminate the balance in so many ways with Mr. [Name] and Ms. [Name].
>>CORRECT!But we couldn\'t solve it.
>>CORRECT!Would you please give me a solution on how to make a zero ?
>>CORRECT!The PO# is 5900000941 and the vendor# is 21002552 (BG).
>>CORRECT!Please see the history as seen below.
>>CORRECT!Thank you for your help.
>>CORRECT!
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