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Have you ever volunteered to help in a disaster?
What did you do?
No, I haven\'t done any volunteering activity before.
Actually, I only did several times in army, which means it was mandatory.
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No, I haven\'t done any volunteering activity before.
>>CORRECT
Actually, I only did several times in army, which means it was mandatory.
>>Actually, I only did it several times in the army, which means it was mandatory.
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