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2011-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Dear [Name].Marisa Hauke, Good afternoon! Would you please give me an invoice of IT,Overhead and ELO Software investment (2,086.00Euro) Or are the invoices issued the costs of the ELO software with IT costs? Please give me an answer. Thank you for your help.

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Hello Bella! Here are your corrections. Thank you so much and take care! :)   Dear [Name].Marisa Hauke, >>CORRECT!Good afternoon! >>CORRECT!Would you please give me an invoice of IT,Overhead and ELO Software investment (2,086.00Euro) >>Would you please give me an invoice of the IT, overhead and ELO software investment (2,086.00 euros).Or are the invoices issued the costs of the ELO software with IT costs? >>Or the invoices issued the costs of the ELO software with the IT costs?Please give me an answer. >>CORRECT!Thank you for your help. >>CORRECT!

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