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Is having an army a waste of money in your country?
No, military force is the final thing that we can rely on in case we have conflicts with other countries.
I am sure that Japan and China will invade us if we do not maintain a powerful military force.
We should not repeat the humiliated history like before.
I don;t feel like being submissive to Japan and China, not to speak of North Korea.
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Is having an army a waste of money in your country?
No, military force is the final thing that we can rely on in case we have conflicts with other countries.
>>>> No, military force is our last resort in case we have conflicts with other countries.
I am sure that Japan and China will invade us if we do not maintain a powerful military force.
>>>> Japan and China would undoubtedly invade our country if we do not maintain a powerful military force.
We should not repeat the humiliated history like before.
>>>> History shouldn\'t repeat itself, i.e. when we were humiliated in the hands of other countries.
I don;t feel like being submissive to Japan and China, not to speak of North Korea.
>>>> I don\'t like us to be submissive to Japan and China, not to mention North Korea.
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