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What is the most popular way of advertising in Korea?
I think posting some ads on some famous internet portals is the most popular way. like Naver or Daum.
Most of big companies are paying a lot of money for advertising on internet portals.
Also, TV commercials are the very effective way to let people acquainted with somethings.
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I think posting some ads on some famous internet portals is the most popular way. like Naver or Daum.
Most of big companies are paying a lot of money for advertising on internet portals.
Also, TV commercials are the very effective way to let people acquainted with somethings.
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I think posting some ads on some famous internet portals is the most popular way. like Naver or Daum.
>>I think posting some ads on famous internet portals such as Naver or Daum is the most popular way.
Most of big companies are paying a lot of money for advertising on internet portals.
>>Most of big companies are paying a lot of money for advertising on internet portals.
Also, TV commercials are the very effective way to let people acquainted with somethings.
>>Also, TV commercials are the most effective way to let people be acquainted with things.
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