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2011-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 ritchel

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! I have some questions about ELO scaning software. It is very good working now and many thanks to use well. I heard that ELO software will charge 2,086.00Euro. I wanna ask to responsible when we can receive the invoice about ELO scaning software. Do you know who is responsible for the invoice about ELO scaning software? I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you!!

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Hi!!! Thank you for your composition. You did a great job. It\'s always my pleasure to help you in your composition. Keep it up! Have a nice day!!!   Here are my corrections: Dear [Name]. [Name], >> Correct!Good morning! >> Correct!I have some questions about ELO scaning software. >>I have some questions about the ELO scaninning software.It is very good working now and many thanks to use well. >> It is very helpful in my work and easy to use as well.I heard that ELO software will charge 2,086.00Euro. >> Correct!I wanna ask to responsible when we can receive the invoice about ELO scaning software. >> I want to ask the person responsible on when can we receive the invoice of the ELO scanning softwareDo you know who is responsible for the invoice about ELO scaning software? >> Correct!I\'m looking forward for your reply. >> Correct!Thank you!! >> Correct!

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