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Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning!
Mr. [Name] from QC or Mr. [Name], from Log. will answer your questions.
Mr. [Name], and Mr. [Name],
Would you please send the e-mail to Mr. [Name]?
Mr. [Name],
These two claims have to cantain Nov closing.
Thank you.
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Dear [Name]. [Name],
>> CorrectGood morning!
>> CorrectMr. Choi from QC or Mr. [Name], from Log. will answer your questions.
>> Mr.Choi of QC or Mr.Noh of Log will answer your questions.Mr. [Name], and Mr. [Name],
>> Mr. [Name] and Mr. [Name].Would you please send the e-mail to Mr. [Name]?
>> CorrectMr. Yetao Wang,
>> Mr. [Name].These two claims have to cantain Nov closing.
>> These two claims have to contain/include the November\'s closing.Thank you.
>> Correct
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