Composition.

2011-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi.Teacher Lara. I didn't do anything last weekend. I Just stayed home, watched some tv programs and to read a book to learn how to read fast english books. Many Koreans try to get their success in the future. But Nowdays, Many young man have a different objective point of view for living. That's what we're changing about culture, perspective and the value of life to know ourselves. I have been deciding my life how to live my own way whether that it's right or not to be harmful in my mind. But I won't be disappointed myself and to proceed to be simple life and for my family. I'm pretty sure that i can evaluate something what i do. I hope that to establish your company in the near future. The dream is a nice goal but it's hard to be leader by people. Anyway,It'll write my last composition. I was enjoyed your voice and your style in this class. Maybe I'll change a teacher that's why I have to experience other people's pattern to learn in our site. Have a nice life

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Hi [이름]!!!  Thank you for this last composition of yours. I hope that you\'ll continue developng your skills in English. I\'ll be missing our voice and our conversation. Just always take care and goodluck.   Hi.Teacher Lara. >> Hi Teacher Lara.I didn\'t do anything last weekend. >> CorrectI Just stayed home, watched some tv programs and to read a book to learn how to read fast english books.>> I just stayed home, watched some tv progtams and read a book in learning how to read fast in English.Many Koreans try to get their success in the future. But Nowdays, Many young man have a different objective point of view for living. >> Many Koreans are trying to get their success in the future. But nowadays, young men have their different point of view to live.That\'s what we\'re changing about culture, perspective and the value of life to know ourselves.>> That\'s what why we\'re changing our culture, perspectives and the value of life in knowing ourselves.I have been deciding my life how to live my own way whether that it\'s right or not to be harmful in my mind. >> I have been thinking on how to live my life, to know what is right and wrong.But I won\'t be disappointed myself and to proceed to be simple life and for my family.>> But I won\'t be disappointed about myself and to maintain with a simple life with my family.I\'m pretty sure that i can evaluate something what i do.>> CorrectI hope that to establish your company in the near future. >> I hope that you could establish your company in the near future.The dream is a nice goal but it\'s hard to be leader by people.>> The dream is a nice one but it\'s hard to lead people.Anyway,It\'ll write my last composition. >> Anyway, this will be my last composition.I was enjoyed your voice and your style in this class. >> I enjoyed listening to your voice and your style of teaching in the class.Maybe I\'ll change a teacher that\'s why I have to experience other people\'s pattern to learn in our site. >> CorrectHave a nice life. >> Correct

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