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What\'s the best way of making a lot of money?
I think there is the best way to make a lot of money. Making money is just up to diligence. Making a lot of money is the result of accumulating small monet for a long time.
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Hi there!^^
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Jean
Make a sentence using the words below:
What\'s the best way of making a lot of money?
I think there is the best way to make a lot of money.
>> As far as I\'m concerned, there is no best way to make a lot of money.
Making money is just up to diligence.
>> correct
Making a lot of money is the result of accumulating small money for a long time.
>> or: Making a lot of money is the result of accumulating small amounts for a long period of time.
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