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2011-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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Dear [Name].Yeimy Navarro, Oh! I already received the invoice about 25153372. The 25153372 invoice is Proto type. So we need more details about proto type of invoice t for knowing well what about Would you please give me a detail for 25153372 invoice?? Thank you for your help

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Hi!!! Thank you for your composition. Please check the corrections I made for you. See you in class. Have a wonderful day! :)   Dear [Name].Yeimy Navarro, >> Correct!Oh! I already received the invoice about 25153372. >> Oh! I already received the invoice for 25153372.The 25153372 invoice is Proto type. >> It is Proto type.So we need more details about proto type of invoice t for knowing well what about >> We need more details about proto type of invoice to know more about it.Would you please give me a detail for 25153372 invoice?? >> Would you please give me a detail for the 25153372 invoice?Thank you for your help >> Correct! ( Please don\'t forget the punctuation mark at the end of the sentence- period)

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