Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
What makes someone beautiful in your country? What differs between that idea and the American idea of beauty? 
I think Koreans prefer somewhat light and gentle face rather than strong face.
So, Korean women usually wear more baby-like makeups.
강사 첨삭
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So, Korean women usually wear more baby-like makeups.
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I think Koreans prefer somewhat light and gentle face rather than strong face.
>>I think Koreans prefer having somewhat light and gentle faces rather than having strong faces.
So, Korean women usually wear more baby-like makeups.
>>CORRECT
OR>>So, Korean women usually wear light makeups.
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