Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
 What matters most in your life right now? 
My career is most significant to me.
I want to earn a lot of money.
Also, i should improve in English.
And then, I must go to America to get a PhD degree.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework!
Thank you for being honest.
Until the next one! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
>>CORRECT
OR>>My career is the most important to me.
I want to earn a lot of money.
>>CORRECT
Also, i should improve in English.
>>Also, I should improve in English.
OR>>Also, I should improve my English skills.
And then, I must go to America to get a PhD degree.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Then, I will go to America to get a PhD degree.
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