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2011-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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Dear [Name].Beata Mizsei, Good morning! We already paid all of open invoices on 08.Dec.2011. So we don't have any Johnson's open invoice from now. You can find list of invoices that we didn't received metarial yet as below. If we receive the materials we will pay before over the due date. By the way, we have credit inoivce and debit invoices as seen below. 10008055 of invoice is from Johnson and 85300080~85300083 of invoice are issued by Behr korea for return delivery. Unfortunately, according to the Korean law , we cannot pay that deduction of the credit note from overseas countries. We only have to receive the credit note and just pay the invoice. We would appreciate receiving the payment as seen below. Here is our bank details as seen below. Thank you for your help and Merry christmas!!! :-)

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Hi!! Thank you for your composition. You did a great job. Just keep up the good work. Kindly review the corrections I made below. Have great day!! ^_^   Dear [Name].Beata Mizsei, >> Correct!Good morning! >> Correct!We already paid all of open invoices on 08.Dec.2011. >>  Correct!So we don\'t have any Johnson\'s open invoice from now. >>  Correct!You can find list of invoices that we didn\'t received metarial yet as below. >> You can find the list of invoices that we didn\'t receive the material yet as below.If we receive the materials we will pay before over the due date. >> If we receive the materials we will pay before the due date.By the way, we have credit inoivce and debit invoices as seen below. >> By the way, we have credit and debit invoices as seen below.10008055 of invoice is from Johnson and 85300080~85300083 of invoice are issued by Behr korea for return delivery. >>  Correct!Unfortunately, according to the Korean law , we cannot pay that deduction of the credit note from overseas countries. >> Correct!We only have to receive the credit note and just pay the invoice. >> Correct!We would appreciate receiving the payment as seen below. >> Correct!Here is our bank details as seen below. >> Correct!Thank you for your help and Merry christmas!!! :-)

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