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What do you think is the biggest issue between China and Korea? How is it affecting you as citizens?
Fine dusts problem is the biggest issue that I wanna bring up. Because of Chinese fine dusts, I feel like my health is getting worse.
IMHO, China as a country is a really abhorrent country in Asia.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
IMHO, China as a country is a really abhorrent country in Asia.
It was nice to meet you last night. ^^
Thank you for making a composition.
I like your use of words!
I hope your government finds a way to restrict China from creating more chemical wastes that affect your country.
~t. Ally
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Fine dusts problem is the biggest issue that I wanna bring up.
>> The fine dust problem is the biggest issue that I want to bring up.
Because of Chinese fine dusts, I feel like my health is getting worse.
>> Because of China\'s fine dust, I feel like my health is getting worse.
IMHO, China as a country is a really abhorrent country in Asia.
>> CORRECT! (if you are speaking formally, it would be best to use the complete expression instead of the abbreviation. ^^)
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