Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think that food defines a culture? If so, how?
Yes, food reflects history of a society, so that we can understand the culture of that society by knowing their traditional food.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, [이름]! I appreciate you taking some time to accomplish the homework. Your sentence is grammatically correct. Just pay attention on how the article \"the\" is being used in this case.
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Yes, food reflects history of a society, so that we can understand the culture of that society by knowing their traditional food.
>> Food reflects the history of a society. Therefore, we can understand the culture of that society by knowing their traditional food.
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