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Dear [Name]. [Name], I have some questions about telephone cost for Mr. [Name]. I received the tax invoice for Mr. [Name]'s mobile for November. The total amount is 2,256,150KRW, it is too high. You can find the detail for 2,256,150KRW as attached file. The 1,445,700KRW is calling cost from overseas to Korea. The 331,900KRW is calling cost from overseas to overseas. I know that he used the telephone for business but I never seen this amount. Mr.SK also concern about this amount. We have to pay this amount until this month but I would like to receive your confirm before payment. I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you and enjoy your vacation!!:-)

Hi there,   Good afternoon! here are the corrections I made for you. Please be guided. See you in class.   Dear [Name]. [Name],>>CorrectI have some questions about telephone the cost for Mr. [Name].>>CorrectI received the tax invoice for Mr. [Name]\'s mobile for November.>>CorrectThe total amount is 2,256,150KRW, it is too high. >>CorrectYou can find the detail for 2,256,150KRW as attached file. >>CorrectThe 1,445,700KRW call cost is  from overseas to Korea.>>CorrectThe 331,900KRW call cost is from overseas to overseas. >>CorrectI know that he used the telephone for business but I never seen this amount.>>I know that he used the telephone for business but I\'ve never seen this amount. Mr.SK also concern about this amount.>> Mr.SK is also concern about this amount.We have to pay this amount until this month but I would like to receive your confirm before payment. >>We have to pay this amount until this month but I would like to receive your confirmation first before paying it. I\'m looking forward for your reply.>>CorrectThank you and enjoy your vacation!!:-) >>Correct