Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
What part of your culture are you most proud about?
We have a lot of expressions which we use only toward seniors. I think English does not have that kind of concept so much. And it is an important matter in language. I am proud of our Korean characters and language itself.
강사 첨삭
Hello there~
Thank you for doing your homework!
I will see you in class~
We have a lot of expressions which we use only toward seniors.
>>CORRECT
I think English does not have that kind of concept so much.
>CORRECT
And it is an important matter in language.
>>It is an important matter related to languages.
I am proud of our Korean characters and language itself.
>>CORRECT
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