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Who do you admire? This question is also interview question. Many people say that steve jobs and bill gates. I know why we say that to pass in company. But in my case,I definitely don't have an idol. So to speak,I'm admiring my parents that's why i saw their love to me. I think that it's the most important to keep our family relationship from alot of problem. My parents don't give me up. I can only admire them. What did you do on the weekend? I went to seoul and i saw some friends but it was not happy because It was really cold. I'm strong on cold, but it was really cold in seoul. We had skirtmeat and drinking a little. I saw some movie when i was coming back in the train. Entiled Do Ga Ni and you are my pet, serect's objects. DoGani was boring, you are my pet was a little seeing and serect's objects was quite impressive. The serect's object is an unusual movie that story line is love affair. Twenties and forties love affair.

Hi!! Thank you for composition. You did great. Keep it up!   have a great day ahead.   Here are my corrections:   Who do you admire? >> Correct!This question is also interview question. >> This question is also one of the interview questions.Many people say that steve jobs and bill gates. >> Many people say that it\'s Steve Jobs and Bill Gates.I know why we say that to pass in company. >> I know why we say that, its because we want to pass and be employed inthe company.But in my case,I definitely don\'t have an idol. >> But in case I\'ll be asked with that question, I definitely don\'t have an idol.So to speak,I\'m admiring my parents that\'s why i saw their love to me. >> So to speak, I\'m admiring my parents because I saw their love for me.I think that it\'s the most important to keep our family relationship from alot of problem. >> I think that would be the most important for us to keep our family relationship inspite of a lot of problems.My parents don\'t give me up. >> my parents don\'t give up on me.I can only admire them. >> They are the only persons I admire.What did you do on the weekend? >> What did you do this weekend?I went to seoul and i saw some friends but it was not happy because It was really cold. >> For me, I went to Seoul and saw some friends but it was not that happy because it was very cold.I\'m strong on cold, but it was really cold in seoul. >> I usually am strong when it\'s cold but this one is different, it\'s really cold in Seoul.We had skirtmeat and drinking a little. >> We ate skirtmeat and have a little bit of drinking.I saw some movie when i was coming back in the train. >> I saw a movies while I\'m riding the train on my way back home.Entiled Do Ga Ni and you are my pet, serect\'s objects. >> It is entittled Do Ga Ni and You are my pet, Secret\'s Objects.DoGani was boring, you are my pet was a little seeing and serect\'s objects was quite impressive. >> Do Ga Ni was boring while You are my Pet was a little bit okay and Secret\'s Objects was quite impressive.The serect\'s object is an unusual movie that story line is love affair. >> The Secret\'s Object is an unusual movie and the story line is about a love affair.Twenties and forties love affair. >> It\'s about twenties and forties love affair.