Composition: a lottery is a good idea?

I do not think that buying a lottery ticket is bad or undesirable. Although some critics are saying that gambling should be entirely prohibited due to its adverse effects such as creating addicts, demoralizing average people who are working hard, and demolishing person’s life and entire household, the lottery still plays an important and a positive role in our society. A lot of people even around us buy a lottery ticket every week and they live a week with hoping that they might win the lottery. In modern society, every man has a tough life and he/she has to overcome the stress and difficulties. Losing hope is disastrous and it is like giving up everything. The lottery is something like energy and power one can endure and rely on although he/she shouldn't be dumb enough to believe that he/she will definitely win the lottery. If one can live a happier life by spending such a small amount of money to buy a lottery ticket, why should we blame it?

Hi there SIR [이름]^^ Thank you so much for sending me a composition today. I really had an amazing time reading it and I was able to think about the people who always buy lottery tickets to try their luck. How about you? Do you buy lottery ticket sometimes? What are the advantages of buying it? We can talk more about this in class! Please go over the corrections I provided for you. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class. See you! Take Care! Teacher Nina I do not think that buying a lottery ticket is bad or undesirable. >> Correct! OR >> I don\'t think that purchasing a lottery ticket is bad or undesirable. Although some critics are saying that gambling should be entirely prohibited due to its adverse effects such as creating addicts, demoralizing average people who are working hard, and demolishing person’s life and entire household, the lottery still plays an important and a positive role in our society. >> Although some critics are saying that gambling should be entirely prohibited due to its adverse effects such as creating addicts, demoralizing average people who are working hard, and demolishing a person\'s life and the entire household, the lottery still plays an important and a positive role in our society. OR >> Although some critics are saying that gambling shouls be entirely prohibited due to its adverse effects such as it is addictive, demoralizing average people who works hard and demoloshing a person\'s life and the entire househol, lottery still plays an imprortant role in our society. A lot of people even around us buy a lottery ticket every week and they live a week with hoping that they might win the lottery. >> A lot of people around us buy a lottery ticket every week and they are hoping that they might win the lottery. OR >> A lot of people aroynd us are still buying lottery tickets every week and they try their luck and hope to win the lottery. In modern society, every man has a tough life and he/she has to overcome the stress and difficulties. >> In modern society, every man has a tough life and he/she has to overcome the stress and difficulties that comes her/his way. Losing hope is disastrous and it is like giving up everything. >> Correct! The lottery is something like energy and power one can endure and rely on although he/she shouldn\'t be dumb enough to believe that he/she will definitely win the lottery. >>Lottery is something like energy and power that one can endure and rely on although he/she shouldn\'t be dumb enough to believe that he/she will definitely win the lottery. If one can live a happier life by spending such a small amount of money to buy a lottery ticket, why should we blame it? >> If one can live a happier life by spending such a small amount of money to buy a lottery ticket, why should we blame him/her?