Composition: Children learn best from adults

Yes, without going to say that children learn from adults. There is a saying that children are the mirror of adults. Even without quoting any research data, by looking around us, we can intuitively recognize the fact that children are copying us: the way of we speak, the words we are using, and the behavior we do as well. If you have ever had experience in raising a kid, you could have noticed how children pick up words and mimic his/her mom or dad. Since it is so obvious that children learn from adults, we as adults should be a good example for children. But in our society regardless of which country we are living in, we are all facing the same problems like children are spoiled and wrongly guided by adults. Even juvenile crimes are prevalent and a serious issue in all modern societies. Who should be blamed for the problems? Of course, the children should be holding themselves accountable for such illegal behavior, but adults cannot be free from being blamed as well.

Hi there SIR [이름]^^ Thank you for sending me this in.^^ I do agree with you because kids usually observe their parents on how they act and talk. They easily pick up some words from their parents. I had an experience raising a kid, it was my nephew and it was really fast for him to learn because he was guided by my parents. Raising a kid is crucial for parents. We can talk more about it in class. See you! Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: Yes, without going to say that children learn from adults. >> Did you mean:Yes, I agree that children learn from adults. There is a saying that children are the mirror of adults. >> Correct! Even without quoting any research data, by looking around us, we can intuitively recognize the fact that children are copying us: the way of we speak, the words we are using, and the behavior we do as well. >> Even without quoting any data, by looking around us, we can intuitively recognize the fact that children are copying us: the way of we speak, the words we are using, and our behavior. If you have ever had experience in raising a kid, you could have noticed how children pick up words and mimic his/her mom or dad. >> If you ever had an experience in raising a kid, you could have noticed how children pick up words and mimic his/her mom or dad. Since it is so obvious that children learn from adults, we as adults should be a good example for children. >> Since it is so obvious that children learn from adults, we as adults should be a good example to children. But in our society regardless of which country we are living in, we are all facing the same problems like children are spoiled and wrongly guided by adults. >> Correct! Even juvenile crimes are prevalent and a serious issue in all modern societies. >> Even juvenile crimes are prevalent and a serious issue in modern societies, Who should be blamed for the problems? >> Correct! Of course, the children should be holding themselves accountable for such illegal behavior, but adults cannot be free from being blamed as well. >> Correct! OR >> Of course, the children should be accountable for such illegal behavior, but adults cannot be free from being blamed as well.