composition : Do you think you'll have a lot of investments when you're order?
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Good morning [이름]!
Well, I guess you really need to be wise when it comes to spending your own money.
Sometimes, we think that we are buying things necessary for us but not really.
Good luck on that then. kkk
See you later!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Yes, i spend much the money to buy things.
>> Yes, I have spent a lot of money on buying things.
i should buy the necessary things.
>> correct!
Also i should buy unnecessary things.
>> Yet, I should also buy some unnecessary things.
so, there are many varity things in my house.
>> So there are a lot of things in my house.
just, i feel happy to get the things.
>> I just feel happy when I have those things.
i think i should make a plan.
>> I think that I should make a plan.
i need to wise spending.
>> I need to be wise in spending.
>> or: I need to be a wise spender.
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