Composition: good neighbor
학생이 쓴 원문
Speaking of the qualities of a good neighbor, they should be polite, kind, and thoughtful. Especially in Korea, most people are living in an apartment so that there is a small community formed in the apartment complex. Due to the structure of the building, people are actually sharing the same spaces like an elevator, a corridor, a yard, a parking lot, etc. Moreover, there is another family living just beside you: above your ceiling, just below your floor, and actually next to your room. Given the situation, people bump into each other at every moment. You can say people are virtually living together. That’s why having a good neighbor is of critical importance. People should be considerate of others to live together. People should not talk about others behind their back. People should respect others. People should be humble. Living in an apartment does not allow you to live quietly and enjoy your personal life. So simply treat others as you wish to be treated.
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Speaking of the qualities of a good neighbor, they should be polite, kind, and thoughtful.
>> Correct!
Especially in Korea, most people are living in an apartment so that there is a small community formed in the apartment complex.
>> Especially in Korea, most people are living in an apartment, so there is a small community formed in the complex apartment.
Due to the structure of the building, people are actually sharing the same spaces like an elevator, a corridor, a yard, a parking lot, etc.
>> Correct!
Moreover, there is another family living just beside you: above your ceiling, just below your floor, and actually next to your room.
>> Correct!
OR >> Moreover, there is another family living just beside you: above your ceiling, just below your floor, and actually next door.
Given the situation, people bump into each other at every moment.
>> Correct!
You can say people are virtually living together.
>> Correct!
That’s why having a good neighbor is of critical importance.
>> That\'s why having a good neighbor is has a critical importance.
People should be considerate of others to live together.
>> People should be considerate of others who live together.
People should not talk about others behind their back.
>> Correct!
People should respect others.
>> Correct!
OR >> People should respect each other.
People should be humble.
>> Correct!
Living in an apartment does not allow you to live quietly and enjoy your personal life.
>> Living in an apartment does not allow you to live peacefully and enjoy your personal life.
So simply treat others as you wish to be treated.
>> Correct!
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